With the development of the society,more and more people live in a stressful life.Some people points out that the best way to truly relax and reduce stress is to spend time alone.From my perspective,I admit that spending time alone plays a key role in relaxing.But,compared with staying alone,i prefer to spend time with my family and friends.For me,it is the best way to relax.
Firstly,family is always my safe harbor.No matter what happen,I can talk with my family that i don’t need to or care about what I said.For example.if I have some troubles which are about working stuff.I can talk to my family what disturbed and troubled me.Compared with my colleagues,talking to my family about these troublesome is a better choice.Because it is possible this negative emotion affect my colleagues so that people around me will all in bad situation.Working in such a atmosphere,down and without imputes,possibly make more people stressful.
Then,family is always standing with you.There is no reason that family do not love anyone in the family.Everyone will support you in any ways.Positive emotion and encouragement play key role to reduce stress and be relax.If someone who has never got any encouragement,he/she will possibly in a stressful status where they can’t easily escape it.Imagine stressful status is a hell,family’s encouragement is the light which lead you back to the heaven.
Next,friends play another key role to relax in a stressful status.Sometimes,we have some secret that disturb you,but you do not want to talk to your family.Friends are the best options.A true friend will definitely help you when he observe you are in something wrong.For instance,when you have some arguments with you family,which make you so stress,you are supposed to talk with your friends.Telling them clearly what happened to you,and then friends can figure out some methods to improve the relationships between you an your family or solve the argument.
Lastly, maybe you are struck in the economic difficulties,talking with your friends is helpful.They may borrow you money or introduce some ways to earn money which are absolutely make you reduce those stress. In deed,we can share more things with your friends,more than things that make you stress.
In conclusion,spending time with your family and friends is a better option to relax and reduce stress.They are always the hardest back to you.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement The best way to truly relax and reduce stress is to spend time alone 66
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 63
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, lastly, may, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 64.0 43.0788530466 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2020.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 384.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26041666667 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.52554156966 2.67179642975 132% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510416666667 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 626.4 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6003584229 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 54.0 20.1344086022 268% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 180.586346581 48.9658058833 369% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 288.571428571 100.406767564 287% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 54.8571428571 20.6045352989 266% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.5714285714 5.45110844103 231% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 60.0 5.5376344086 1083% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324852637368 0.236089414692 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.18864224733 0.076458572812 247% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109736895347 0.0737576698707 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204585999637 0.150856017488 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112231314008 0.0645574589148 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.8 11.7677419355 262% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 16.67 58.1214874552 29% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.10430107527 239% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.4 10.1575268817 240% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.12 10.9000537634 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.01818996416 122% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 10.002688172 285% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.6 10.0537634409 235% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 24.0 10.247311828 234% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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