In recent years, It is becoming increasingly popular for people working and studying overseas. In my view, such a great benefit, although detrimental at some point could be seen as an essential step forward.
On the one hand, there are some viable advantages to living overseas. Firstly, people who study at overseas prestigious universities would be getting highly expectation because their qualification gaining abroad can suitable for multination cooperations. Besides, students can immerse themselves in the language in the future, with their skillful of languages they may get a job like a languages teacher. Thirdly, settling into a foreign country play a great role for people broaden their horizons, for example, people have changed to explore all kind of local culture and customs such as cuisine, costumes, festivals, landscapes, etc. Last but not least, working abroad allows you to build relationships with people in your field on an international level so even when you decide to move back to your home country, you can continue to nurture these relationships.
On the other hand, the disadvantages of living abroad are varied. Firstly, people often face the biggest difficulty of the language barrier, some languages you can learn before coming to a new country, actually it will be far from your imagination. Speaking too fast or in harsh tones makes you unable to understand anything and takes a long time to get used to. Secondly, people have to cope with the strictness of local -paperwork such as visa applications or labor permits. Because, in some developed countries such as Europe or America, there are often rigorous requirements on education, health, and finance for foreign workers or foreign students. Thirdly, young people who go abroad will suffer from homesickness because they have never been away from home for too long, if they do not overcome this homesickness, they will become very difficult to communicate and may causing depression. Last but not least, living in another country, foreigners are more likely to become victims of discrimination and racism, for example, in European countries, some fascist organizations often acts harmful to Asians or blacks.
In conclusion, although there are many advantages and disadvantages of living and studying abroad, I think that experiencing life far away from home will make people more mature and will have more memorable experiences
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 386, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'languages'' or 'language's'?
Suggestion: languages'; language's
... of languages they may get a job like a languages teacher. Thirdly, settling into a forei...
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Line 3, column 485, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... applications or labor permits. Because, in some developed countries such as Euro...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...gn workers or foreign students. Thirdly, young people who go abroad will suffer f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for example, i think, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2038.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 383.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32114882507 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91411885562 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582245430809 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 638.1 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.7561712294 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.866666667 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5333333333 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165009900667 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706669716418 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102916882667 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122217543419 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0832681066968 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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