An English speaking friend would like to visit your town/city and has written to you to ask for some advice. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter
Say when is the best time to visit your town/city is
Tell your friend what the most interesting places are
Suggest where you can find cheap accommodation
Dear Lisa,
I am glad to hear that you planned an expedition to my place and finally we are going to spend some time together. In your letter, you have asked a few questions and I am going to answer them.
The best time suited for visiting my town is autumn because it’s neither too hot nor too cold during that time. Therefore, you don’t need to carry heavy winter clothes. Moreover, the falling of the leaves from trees makes the town more fascinating.
If I talk about the interesting places, there are many but here I would like to mention a few that are the most popular. The first is the Jagatjit Palace which was a residence of Maharaja of Kapurthala. The specialty of this place is its remarkable architecture and this place is now transformed into a school to train boys for the National Defence Academy. The other one is Panch Mandir, one of the ancient temple that is dedicated to several Hindu deities.
There are various hotels in the heart of the city where you will get a room at a reasonable price. However, I would suggest comparing the prices as well as a rating from trivago.com so that you could get a room at an affordable price otherwise you are most welcome at my place as well.
Hope to see you soon.
Yours truly,
Emily
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 358, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... boys for the National Defence Academy. The other one is Panch Mandir, one of the a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1032.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 229.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50655021834 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44061443993 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628820960699 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6595324046 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.3846153846 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6153846154 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 4.34317383033 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254882497742 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0738946222416 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566953321049 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100331684021 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481632932453 0.0580467560999 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.