“In the six months that I have been watching the employees, their productivity has increased by over 12 percent. Therefore, my recommendation is that the employees either be watched by, or think that they are watched by, an outside evaluator at all times from this point on.”
Businesses have to make very tough decisions in order to be successful. Many businesses usually consider many factors before making these decisions. That is why the recommendation that the employees of the firm need to watched, or think that they are being watched needs to be subject to more analysis before it is considered the best solution for this firm.
Although it seems that a 12% increase in productivity is meager, there needs to be comparison of this increase to previous years or months. What if the increase of 12% was two-fold better than the previous 6 months? If this is the ca...
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Sentence: That is why the recommendation that the employees of the firm need to watched, or think that they are being watched needs to be subject to more analysis before it is considered the best solution for this firm.
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Suggestion: Refer to to and watched
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Fourth Root of Number of Words: 5.14 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.801 4.6
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Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.472 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.126 0.07
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