The usage of private car is increasing as a principle vehicle. There are several problem related to this, however, some measures should be taken to tackle this.
To begin with, the rapid using of private car is responsible for traffic congestion over the cities. To illustrate, usage more and more personal car means that there are numerous cars in the road for few persons which is resulted in traffic jam. Furthermore, increasing vehicles meant that the emission of more carbon dioxide (CO2). For example, provided that there is 100 people in two buses, however, if 50 percent of them purchase private car there will be 51 vehicles releasing the toxic gas CO2. As a result of this, the environment is polluting sharply and put health condition also getting worse with time.
On the other hand, some steps can be put into practice to address this problem. Firstly, government should imply some rules to purchasing a private car. The government of Bangladesh, for instance, impose extra 200 percent tax on purchasing. Therefore, who are willing to buy a car should have huge amount of money, which is tough for mass people, so they are not interesting in buying own car resulted in less congestion in road. Secondly, introducing public means of vehicles and increasing consciousness to use this among public can be the solution to reduce environment pollution. If two hundred people use four public transport rather than using own car, there will be few CO2 released in the air. Consequently, there will less pollution and our circumstance will be fresh.
To conclude, problems such as traffic jam and environment pollution can be the result of too much safe of private car, however, implying extra tax and adding public transports can be the solution to this.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 82, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'problems'?
Suggestion: problems
... a principle vehicle. There are several problem related to this, however, some measures...
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Line 3, column 327, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...that the emission of more carbon dioxide CO2. For example, provided that there is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99322033898 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68286186257 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545762711864 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2201599051 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7333333333 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249810708948 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0888528629443 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606226310667 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163239899897 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317938722312 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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