Some people say that schools do not make enough efforts in teaching young people to look after their health and they add that schools should undertake health education seriously Do you agree or disagree

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Some people say that schools do not make enough efforts in teaching young people to look after their health and they add that schools should undertake health education seriously . Do you agree or disagree ?

Undoubtedly , it is universal truth that " health is wealth " , but with today's rapidly changing world health issues are becoming worrying concern . It has been extremely debatable whether schools should take health education seriously or not . I ponder that it will derive positive consequences if added .

Multifarious factors are there to prove it . First and foremost , is that when they are taught at tender age they learn better as it is said that " The early bird catches the worm " and as a result they will become more health conscious which will automatically inhibit the risk of abse...

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it is universal truth
it is a universal truth

health issues are becoming worrying concern
health issues are becoming a worrying concern

First and foremost , is that when they are taught at tender age
First and foremost , when they are taught at tender age

Sentence: To recapitulate, I strongly believe that the positive outcomes of adding health education overweigh it's negative side.
Error: overweigh Suggestion: overweight

Sentence: Factor supporting to this is that it is proved by scientific research that child' s mind develop upto the age of 5 and they show extraordinary talent of becoming an erudite .
Error: upto Suggestion: up to

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Don't put a space before punctuation marks.
Always put a space after punctuation marks. E-rater is sensitive.

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