Without capital punishment(the death penalty)our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase.Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society.
To What extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
People are divided in their opinion regarding capital punishment. These days although the rate of crimes has decreased tremendously, our lives are not fully safe and secure. Many people support the view that capital punishment is necessary and that is the ultimate option.
It seems to me that capital punishment is a controversial issue. To begin with, the death penalty does not decrease the rate of crimes and violence in society. On one side of the argument, some people argue that the benefits of capital punishment considerably outweigh its disadvantages. Only by putting murderers to death can society ensure that convicted killers do not kill again. This is a significant view to keep in mind. What if keeping a person alive can cause even more deaths. On the other hand, it is possible to make the opposing case. It is also possible to say that a person’s behavior and thinking is based upon his surrounding environment. I do agree, that nothing justifies committing crimes. Rather than the death penalty various degrees of punishment to be levied concerning the offence committed. This will allow improving with the feeling of repent. A particularly good example here is of sleeper cells. They are a group of people who plant explosives and create violence.
I disagree with the given topic. According to natural rights theory, every person has the right to live and should not be denied this right either by the government or any law. The law must be equal for all.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, regarding, so, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1238.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9718875502 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71973256232 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63453815261 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.485739638 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.1578947368 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1052631579 20.7667163134 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296858253073 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070077102515 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595466014214 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164769743964 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.077359426607 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.0946893788 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.66 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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