it is obvious that in every school, we still have some naughty students. It depends on numerous reasons and to face with this problem, lots of experts have given advices to assist school and parents in teaching students.
FIrstly, children with bad attitude often is the result of terrible fosterage of parents. Some persons usually overindulge their kids because they reckon this is good for them or they feel irresponsible when not spend much time with them. besides , moms or dads sometimes use violence to punish children , according to experts this will negatively effect the thinking of children. at school, some teachers feel stressful about ill-disciplined students and they think the best way to deal with it is ignore them and merely focus on obedient ones. this action just makes the situation worse .
To solve this issue, professionals recommend that the most effective way is talking with them in order to help teachers and parents to penetrate children, to understand why they do that, why they don't obey the adult and how they can cooperate to address it. In addition, everyone have to get rid of violence by any way to help children have a true childhood.
All in all, there are various causes that can ruin the a child, but choose to accept and lend a hand to them or pass over and isolate them from society depends on you.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, so, still, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1111.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 231.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80952380952 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51061374698 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640692640693 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.1357156252 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.1 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119739948291 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0466088506059 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393286733639 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0719549891041 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448054280946 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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