Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I would like to agree on the given statement that today's life is easier and more comfortable than it was when our grandparents were children, I have some specific reasons for this. Let’s take look on some of those.
The things and the comfort that we are having now, we wouldn’t have imagined these things a decade before. To live the life, we have lot of luxury and many things that are making our life much easier. For example, we have lot of options to travel, like we have hyperloops - now that is faster way to travel from one place to another. And these things were not there when our grandparents were young. They used to travel by their own that time without any help with the technology or any vehicle.
When I was a young my grandfather used to tell some of his childhood incidents and now, he always feels amazed when he sees that how the technology that we are having now is impacting our lifestyle and how we are completely relied on it. For example, cell phones, electric vehicles, and other gadgets. He always says these things are beyond his imagination, and very new to him. He says that when he was a child, they did not have such facilities and luxury and things that are making our life easier.
Other thing is, they were not having the facility for emails and phones. So, if they want to communicate with each other they used to travel from their place to another or through letters. And now when they see us doing such things like phone calls and emails, they get surprised that how these technologies are saving lot of human efforts and time.
When my grandparents were young, they didn't have the advanced facilities in the kitchens as well, like automated gas burners and other utensils. So, considering the points that we have highlighted here, we can surely say that our today's life is much easier faster and more comfortable than our grandparents had.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 51, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
...ke to agree on the given statement that todays life is easier and more comfortable tha...
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Line 9, column 39, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
... When my grandparents were young, they didnt have the advanced facilities in the kit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1559.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 337.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62611275964 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38046572444 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486646884273 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 483.3 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4900593558 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4375 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0625 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.9375 5.45110844103 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195647127954 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766511503848 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10079699719 0.0737576698707 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147717962013 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107543714014 0.0645574589148 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 86.8835125448 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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