Countries become more and more similar because people able to buy some products anywhere in the world. Do you think is negative or positive development?
It is true that world is becoming a global village through the development of technology. More over, people could able to purchase their products anywhere in the world. In this essay,I will discuss the positive and negative effects with an apt example.
Firstly, Convenient method of purchasing online products through internet or phone. Although there are some competition among all companies all around the globe. Moreover companies will improve their quantities and qualities of both their goods and services benefits to the customers. As a result, people choose good quality of commodities rather than fake ones. For example,there are some beverages folks used to drink that is pepsi,cola, fruity etc in which helps to enjoy the delicious taste with trendy packaging with reasonable prices.
Secondly,there are some negative impacts of this issue that should be mentioned. some of the food which are not available due to the traditions and cultural diversity in some parts of the world. For example, fast food such as KFC can be found anywhere on the streets instead of traditional food restaurants which people tend to love and eat national cuisine which envoke the feeling of their country. More over people in the different nation have different culture of food. Furthermore, for those countries lost their identities which can be the cause of harmful and may cause further consequences. We should not forget either the traditional products like medicine, cosmetics, toys, clothes, utensils or food, provide employment for local people.Also people turn to buy new brand to become more glamorous than the one they are used to.
In conclusion,all these things may cause negative and positive influences to the global trade , which especially occurs in developing countries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34519572954 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7784496949 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622775800712 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1436159668 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.133333333 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7333333333 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.06666666667 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256906280681 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834162662568 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077061251167 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15938556878 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102958263795 0.056905535591 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.