Dear Hajara,
Hope you have been well.it's been long since you last visited Nigeria. I'm writing to you to request the ingredients I can use to prepare the special Ghanian Fried rice for my upcoming 25th birthday celebration. You know how excited I am about celebrating my birthdays and this one wouldn't be any exception.
I believe you'd be able to help me get these items as I am unable to get them here. I have searched online to see the nearest shop where I can get these things but I got no useful information. I remembered the last time I visited Ghana, you had prepared this very unique meal. Aa such you would be able to assist me in sending them across.
I'd like to invite you to my birthday celebration and I'd be glad if you come. In case you have forgotten my both date, I was born on the 25th of December and the celebration will hold on that day at my parents house.
I hope to hear from you soonest.
Your friend,
Rukki
- Write a letter to a friend asking for a recipe from his her country for the party you are organizing In your letter Tell your friend about the party Ask for the recipe Explain why you need the recipe from his her country 77
- Some people say that it is impossible to live comfortably in big cities What problems are faced by the people living in big cities What solutions can be taken to solve this problem 73
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... I visited Ghana, you had prepared this very unique meal. Aa such you would be able to assi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 779.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4011299435 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43735387783 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64406779661 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8262565887 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.8181818182 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0909090909 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.45454545455 4.34317383033 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134713076852 0.216113520407 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633155856465 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526395789242 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0840744737964 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407134671444 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.