The media should include more stories which report good news. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is sometimes argued that just report good news. While I strongly agree with this statement, news coverage should focus more on bad news when necessary.
Good thinking is reporting a more positive story. We all need to know this good news to comprehend the development of our country. The story which makes front-page headlines influence the convincing of the community. For example, in recent months, the extraordinary news is Vietnam early prevented the Covid pandemic. It should form part of editorial policy carry a story such as these since they have a positive impact on public morale.
However, it would be also crucial to introduce restrictions on reporting negative stories. Civil and wars disaster has to be public on the television about their destruction. These stories come from sensational journalism, they update intermittently and keep abreast of these happening so as to obtain informed knowledge of contemporary issues. For instance, a host of environmental bad news which is the habitat on the verge of facing danger and exhaustion. If these problems are ignored in the media, the chance of an ecological crisis will increase.
In conclusion, while I agree with the importance of reporting good news, it also necessary for the media to report all the significant bad news in the world today.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 286, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...tly and keep abreast of these happening so as to obtain informed knowledge of contempora...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1102.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 214.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14953271028 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91053606642 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630841121495 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 350.1 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.4543261684 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7692307692 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4615384615 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306338577044 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10053574194 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742623423333 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198021077016 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664008807159 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.