There are no denying facts that countries are developing day by day. But the crime rate also lead their progress. A host of individuals deems that due to robbery and kidnapping many of the people are afraiding to step out inside the houses. It will articulate the causes and utilise the best option to keep secure ourselves in the forthcoming paragraphs.
To begin with , crime rates are increasing everyday and spreading in mostly developing countries, where the people suffer from poverty, unemployments. A news channels has telecast a number of news, which is mostly related to the crimes such as chain snatching, murders and so on. In developing countries, there are a major crimes commit by the juveniles juvenile deliquency is the major issue in every countries. Mostly youngsters are commit a crime for fulfil their large expenses such as drug abuse , cyber crimes. In this crime rate, India , South Africa and other asian countries are major in this chart.
On the contrary hand, nowadays, society are becoming more alert and being ready against every crimes. Most of girl are keep eye spray inside the purses and also learn a karate from trainers and reduce to wear a gold ornaments. Many of the countries are mention their emergency number on every wall ,inside buses.tIf they seen any kind of crime, then they are call for the police and the police immediate com. Now.police are feeling scared and the ciminals are alerting and afraind to commit such kind of crime.
To recaptulate , in the presence of the society , crime is a obvious thing, which happen in anywhere and good and bad person present everywhere . Government is responsible for every crime. A law and rule should be harsh for criminal. So that they would think ten time to commit crime. Public must be alert and to face every criminal with bravely and give punishment
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ple suffer from poverty, unemployments. A news channels has telecast a number of news,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, kind of, such as, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90705128205 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52589335825 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580128205128 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.3965671877 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0555555556 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05555555556 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0895568772364 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0302946870407 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0334282685661 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0634065161553 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374253422085 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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