Social Media websites have amassed large user bases, and have become the sole source of information for their users.
Do the advantages of being a part of a social media site outweigh the disadvantages?
In the present era, social platform is the mere trajectory to intrinsic data for account holders because of its massive user bases. I opine that the demerits outstrip the merits of social sites. This essay shall delineate the pros and cons to manifest the deleterious effects of the social hub.
To begin with, the lifestyle of many has become sedentary because of inordinate use of social media. They have become inactive since they are connected with individuals through such portals, which dramatically impact their health. Moreover, online interactions have inflicted social anxiety in several people, due to which they are petrified of physical conversations.
Furthermore, social media has a diverse range of materials which include arduous contents as well. A person could unintenionally click on a suspicious link that might demonstrate onerous videos such as terrorists attacks and other violent pursuits. Therefore, such acts could have pernicious effects on the mental state of humans. For instance, terrorists might encourage people to become gangsters to disseminate fear the world over.
Social connections benefit users in a tremendous manner that could assist them in accumulating essential information. People follow profiles of top industries and search for job opportunities and apply for their dream occupation to pursue their career. Additionally, they network with inspirational leaders that may help them to strive for future prospects. To illustrate, potential candidates attempt to interview for big firms and immigrate to other nations once they are hired.
In conclusion, social platform is a huge resouce for various material pertaining to different fields. In my perspective, such a media has enormous detrimental effects whih certainly outweigh the its benefits.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2020-12-11 | Chirag Bhardwaj | 73 | view |
| 2020-11-16 | jobjp37 | 73 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66051660517 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95161436195 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645756457565 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.654153037 49.4020404114 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.875 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9375 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267403124448 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781558162514 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393181875821 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135677566178 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0249791802042 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.25 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.49 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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