compares the age population between two countries Yeman and Italy in 2000 and 2050

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compares the age population between two countries Yeman and Italy in 2000 and 2050

The pie chart compares the proportion of people in three groups of age of two countries Yemen and Italy in 2000 and 2050.
It clear that the percentage of people under 14 years of age in both countries Yemen and Italy is expected to tend to downward over the provide period. In addition, the population of both countries is predicted to age over the fifty-year period.
In 2000, the people under 14 years of age made up the largest proportion of population in Yemen, while most Italians (61,6%) fell into the 15-59 age groups. However, people aged above 60 in Italy stood at 24,1% was around 20% particular higher than that in Yemen. Finally, the percentage of Yemen’s inhabitants aged 15-59 standing at 45,3% was approximately 15% lower than that in Italy.

By 2050, the percentage of children in Yemen under 15 is predicted to plummet to 37,0%. The similar trend was seen when we look at the figure for Italy (11,5%). On the other hand, a particular growth more than a half is expected in 15 to 59 age group in Yemen. By contrast, the figure for Italy is expected a sharp drop to about 48,2%. Finally, the elderly people in both countries are anticipate that increase, most noticeably in Italy where the figure expected to growth by 18,1%.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 4, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'clears'?
Suggestion: clears
...s Yemen and Italy in 2000 and 2050. It clear that the percentage of people under 14 ...
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Line 2, column 133, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
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...ly is expected to tend to downward over the provide period. In addition, the population of ...
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Line 5, column 385, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'anticipated'.
Suggestion: anticipated
...he elderly people in both countries are anticipate that increase, most noticeably in Italy...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, look, while, in addition, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 33.7804878049 145% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1027.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 220.0 196.424390244 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66818181818 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50969607327 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 307.8 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.7413659331 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3636363636 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90909090909 5.23603664747 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280941957336 0.215688989381 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11927950533 0.103423049105 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106894979589 0.0843802449381 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218194138231 0.15604864568 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122432208723 0.0819641961636 149% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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