last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends They have just sent you some photos of your holiday Write a letter to your friends In your letter 1 thank them for the photos and for the holiday 2 explain why you didn t write earli

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last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter
1) thank them for the photos and for the holiday.
2) explain why you didn't write earlier.
3) invite them to come and stay with you.

Dear John and Nicole,

I hope you're doing good.I can't express how much we enjoyed with you guys last month and would like to thank you for a memorable holidays in the beautiful city of Leeds, UK and the amazing photographs that you sent me yesterday.

Firstly, Vikas and I are extremely grateful for your incrediable hospitality during our recent trip to UK.It was an unforgetable experience to live with natives which helped us to undestand the culture and lifestyle of the british people.It was very thoughtful of you to send the pictures of the great time we had and these will be a part of our travel memory wall.

Secondly, I want apologise for not writing you back earlier. As soon as we landed, we got stuck with our worklife since we were absent at our work a lot of work got pending along with many deadlines to met. It was difficult to take even a breather.

Lastly, I would like to invite you to visit India and stay with us, we'll arrange accommodation, travel itinerary and many more fun activities. I just shifted to a spacious four bedroom house in the happening part of the city. It'll be our pleasure to serve as your host and return the favour in a way. I urge you to consider the visit by the ned of this year.

Your Lovingly,
Anjali.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear John and Nicole, I hope youre doing good.I cant express h...
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Line 3, column 8, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
Dear John and Nicole, I hope youre doing good.I cant express how much we e...
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Line 3, column 25, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...d Nicole, I hope youre doing good.I cant express how much we enjoyed with ...
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Line 3, column 27, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...Nicole, I hope youre doing good.I cant express how much we enjoyed with you g...
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Line 3, column 59, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... good.I cant express how much we enjoyed with you guys last month and would like ...
^^
Line 3, column 130, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'holiday'?
Suggestion: holiday
...would like to thank you for a memorable holidays in the beautiful city of Leeds, UK and ...
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Line 5, column 107, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...ospitality during our recent trip to UK.It was an unforgetable experience to live ...
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Line 5, column 239, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...ure and lifestyle of the british people.It was very thoughtful of you to send the ...
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Line 9, column 186, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'house' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'houses'.
Suggestion: houses
...just shifted to a spacious four bedroom house in the happening part of the city. Itll...
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Line 14, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s year. Your Lovingly, Anjali.
^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1049.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 230.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56086956522 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50398925573 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639130434783 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 103.056537881 44.8134815571 230% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 104.9 76.5299724578 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 16.8248392259 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 4.34317383033 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275860140349 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100068397811 0.0766984524023 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0870454083653 0.0603063233224 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128882615784 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104212784337 0.0580467560999 180% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 8.62886597938 330% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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