Some people consider computer to be more of a hindrance than a help. Others believe that they have greatly increased human potential. How could comouters be considered a hindrance?
Nowadays, computer is being important device for all generation. People have different opinions about the benefits and drawbacks of computer. While some people have greatly increased human potential, some others believe computer gives more hindrance than benefit. Therefore, the purpose of this essay is to examine how could computers be considered a hindrance.
Computer has many effects for human potential. Firstly, in social and psycologist impact, computer will make people addiction. Computer's features have an actractive influence for our stimulus response. We will feel cannot live withou...
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computer is being important device
computer is being an important device
Sentence: Firstly, in social and psycologist impact, computer will make people addiction.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to people and addiction
Sentence: We will feel cannot live without computer.
Description: A verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive is not usually followed by a modal auxillary
Suggestion: Refer to feel and cannot
there are 60% worker who are doing their job with computer will choose to take a rest use their compur
60% workers who are doing their job with computer will choose to take a rest after they use their computer
They think use this application will make their picture is more beautiful
They think using this application will make their picture more beautiful
Sentence: For example: a number of children in International school choose to make a picture with photoshop or similar application than drawing themselves.
Description: The fragment school choose to is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace choose with verb, past tense
Sentence: They did not feel difficult complete it.
Description: An adjective is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to difficult and complete
Sentence: People who have used computer for along time, would be inferred the wave radiation to decrease eye health.
Description: The token for is not usually followed by a preposition
Suggestion: Refer to for and along
Sentence: Some people believe computer give more hindrance than benefit to decrease the human potential.
Description: The fragment computer give more is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace give with verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Sentence: Firstly, in social and psycologist impact, computer will make people addiction.
Error: psycologist Suggestion: psychologist
Sentence: Computer's features have an actractive influence for our stimulus response.
Error: actractive Suggestion: attractive
Sentence: For example, in Jakarta there are 60 worker who are doing their job with computer will choose to take a rest use their compur such as, playing games, browsing in social media, or watching movies.
Error: compur Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Secondly, computer could be considered a hindrance for human pontential in education.
Error: pontential Suggestion: potential
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 9 2
Read a good grammar book.
Make sure you understand the word hindrance'
Definitions of hindrance
noun
a thing that provides resistance, delay, or obstruction to something or someone.
"a hindrance to the development process"
synonyms: impediment, obstacle, barrier, bar, obstruction, handicap, block, hurdle, restraint, restriction, limitation, encumbrance, interference, complication, delay, drawback, setback, difficulty, inconvenience, snag, catch, hitch, check, stumbling block, fly in the ointment, hiccup, wrench in the works
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 9 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 4 2
No. of Sentences: 24 15
No. of Words: 322 350
No. of Characters: 1718 1500
No. of Different Words: 184 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.236 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.335 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.69 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 141 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 110 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 83 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 47 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 13.417 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.164 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.542 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.311 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.489 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.067 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5