The bar Chart depicts international sales of 4 variants of digital games 2001 to 2006. Unites are measured in a billion dollars.
Overall the handheld game had the highest sales in the given years. Online games and mobile phone games were introduced in 2001 and 2002 respectively. While sales of console games were reducing over the years.
Handheld games made just below $12 billion in 2001. The sales of handheld games Rose over the time and reached the peak of around $18 billions in 2006. While console games were at near 6 billion dollars in 2001, the sales dropped over the given period and was at around 3 billion dollars in final year.
On the other hand online games was started making slightly above billion dollar in 2001. Mobile phone games arrived in 2002 with the sales of around 1 billion dollars which was similar to the online games. Both type of games showed an increase of sales over time, but mobile phone games overtook the online games with the sales of nearly 3 billion dollars to slightly below 3 billion dollars of online game in year 2006. After some years online games dethroned mobile phone games with the sales of around 10 billion dollars compared to above 6 billion dollars of mobile phone games.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply: 'a billion'.
Suggestion: a billion
...es 2001 to 2006. Unites are measured in billion dollars. overall the handheld game h...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Overall
...tes are measured in billion dollars. overall the handheld game had the highest sales...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
...troduced in 2001 and 2002 respectively. while sales of console games were reducing ov...
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Message: “while” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...troduced in 2001 and 2002 respectively. while sales of console games were reducing ov...
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Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...on dollars of online game in year 2006. After some years online games dethroned mobil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1017.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 214.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7523364486 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.11939972253 2.65546596893 80% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.429906542056 0.547539520022 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 315.9 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.427486168 43.030603864 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.75 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8333333333 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358139100389 0.215688989381 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165848443796 0.103423049105 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0790517149615 0.0843802449381 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24183048795 0.15604864568 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605167478922 0.0819641961636 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.2329268293 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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