Computer games are very popular for all ages and nationalities.
Parents think this has little educational value and it will be harmful for children.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people say that computer games are becoming popular for all nationalities and ages and has limited educational value and are harmful to the children, In my Opinion, I agree that computer games are harmfull due to its violence and health issues due to its nature.
The updates in technology have made computer games increasingly popular all over the world. They are variety of games which suits people of all ages and nationalities. The addictive nature of these games make people play for a long time without a break causing heath issues. Sitting longer time at one place and staring at screen will cause eye irritation and obeseity. Recent survey by a news journal published that major reason for the most of the people effected by eye sight is due to spending more time on computer screens.
Additionally, these days the nature of the online games are violent. These will invoke the violent nature of the gamers. Recently a study conducted on mental behavior revealed that repetition of the same work will turn into habit.By playing the violent games, gamers will start thinking aggresivly which will have negitive impact on the psychological health of the gamers and to the society. The recently a police investigation on street racers, who was caught in car racing have admitted to the fact that they got and idea of racing from a car racing computer game they played recently.
In conclusion, I would like to reiterate that there are harmful effects psychologically and physically on people who play computer games. Hence computer games should not be encouraged during childhood.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, so, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1330.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01886792453 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64715300093 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566037735849 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.5985733557 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.833333333 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0833333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267969851454 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0915850250041 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760166434702 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16896840614 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0907780264275 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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