Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. Do you agree or disagree?
Money is a valuable commodity and the future of everyone, be it a country, a family or an individual depends on how prudently we manage it. Therefore, there is always a bone of contention that the government should curb the allotted budget for arts like music or theatre and invest in other communal services. However, I completely disagree with the statement as arts reflect the cultural value and a great stress buster.
There are two reasons why I am not inclined to cut the budget of the arts. Firstly, Arts is the life of our culture. Through music and theatre, one can display the custom and traditions of their community. For example, by watching the theatre of a particular region, one can easily predict the nature of the people of that particular place, their dressing style and their beliefs. Hence, arts is of utmost importance to understand the culture of other regions, which would, in turn, make them tolerant of others' beliefs.
Secondly, arts are rejuvenating as they help individuals to fight depression. Due to technical revolution, people usually find themselves alone as everyone is busy with their own gadgets; thus, because of lack of socialization, they get slipped into depression. Then, these arts are the way to indulge themselves in some kind of activity such as painting, dancing. Not only this would help them to fight depression but also build confidence by getting appreciation. Therefore, arts place an important role in one's life.
To encapsulate, having discussed both merits and demerits of arts and needs of public services, the benefits arts bring in, such as instilling respect for other cultures and a kind of medicine for mental illness recommends that it should be given monetary support.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 510, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, thus, for example, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06968641115 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76858595114 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623693379791 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0550407381 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.928571429 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165803138026 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0480378012414 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465035146194 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0945927766191 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611611153724 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.