Some people think that universities should provide graduates the knowledge and skills needed in the work place. Others think the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer.
What, in your opinion, should be the main function of a university?
practical skills are as important as theoretical knowledge of a particular subject. This essay completely agrees with the viewpoint of providing practical knowledge and skills required for a job, during their university education.
Universities are meant to provide higher education since, probably it is the last stage of their study. Morever, pupils had already decided their field of interest once they took admission in a college. they choose a distinct course rather than taking multiple subjects so they can enhance their skills which further required in future.
providing knowledge of workplace and some definite skills will help students in several ways. Initially, theywill have an idea of what the future job demands. Aditionally, it will help him to get the study related job. during the last period of their course, enhancing practical knowledge will not only reduce their training period but also will make them a suitable candidate for an employer. Many organisations hire their employees on the basis of skills and experience rather than their qualifications.
To conclude, university education have the biggest impact on an individuals career, hence providing skills and knowledge related to workplace during the course should be mandatory.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1080.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 193.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59585492228 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8028933096 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626943005181 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.9967152675 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1818181818 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5454545455 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.18181818182 7.06120827912 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185385806641 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750342236496 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726814807302 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136422414529 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0690362392349 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.9 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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