the chart below show the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.
The given bar graph depicts the proportion of households comparing rental and owned housing in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011.
To begin with, in 1918, the ratio of rental house was more than triple as compare to owned housing, which is also recorded as the highest with over 75% in given timeframe. However, when the time passed the percentage of rented accommodation start declining and vice versa to owned housing.
In 1939 and 1953, the ratio of rental housing was recorded almost equal with 78% and owned housing was also seen in similar trend with just over 30%. Similarly, in 1961, rented accommodation exceed owned accommodation by nearly 20%. But, in 1971 the ratio of both rented and owned housing are at the same level with just 50%.
Furthermore, after 1971, the trend was changed and till 2011 the owned properties exceed the rental. In 1981, the percentage was recorded roughly 60% and 40% for owned and rented respectively. Moreover, nearly 70% for owned and just above 30% for rented in 1991 and same was accounted in 2001 too. Although, in 2011 the rented properties increased by significant portion then previous and reached up to approximately 35% and owned properties was recorded as roughly 65%.
Overall, as the graph presents, the first half of the given time frame was exceeded by households who rented housing, while after 1971, the trend dramatically changed and vice versa.
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...nearly 70% for owned and just above 30% for rented in 1991 and same was accounte...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, similarly, so, then, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1183.0 965.302439024 123% => OK
No of words: 237.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99156118143 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54438426586 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506329113924 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 335.7 283.868780488 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7726975639 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.545454545 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5454545455 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.63636363636 5.23603664747 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257348281531 0.215688989381 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119258845653 0.103423049105 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.072373187491 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156883199263 0.15604864568 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687565949648 0.0819641961636 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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