The charts below show the total number of applicants the year before and the year after Doolittle University’s social media advertising campaign, organized by age range and how close the applicants live to the university.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Chart given below represent effects on number of applicants enrolling for Dolittle univerisity after social media advertising campaign was organised by taking into consideration applicants who live within 100km of univeristy and those who live further than 100km.
In general, social media advertisment campaign had positive effect within 100km of university's range as number of applicants in each age range increased after it. Whereas, advertisment campaign had somewhat mix result while considering applicants who live further than 100 km from university.
Number of applicants in 40+ age range saw most amount of increment when considering proximity of 100km. Applicants in this age group increased from approximately 10 to 50 after social media campaign. However, not much increment was seen in 40+ age range if we consider applicants who live further than 100km from university and only small increment of close to 10 applicants was observed.
Age range of 18-22 has contrasting result in both charts. Though the overall effect of social media advertisment was postive in both the charts, considerable amount of increment, close to 170 applicants, was seen in applicants who live further than 100km. Whereas the same age group saw a very small increase in number of applicants if we consider applicants who live with in 100km of university.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 164, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s in each age range increased after it. Whereas, advertisment campaign had somewhat mix...
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Line 3, column 208, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'mixed', 'mixt'.
Suggestion: mixed; mixt
...eas, advertisment campaign had somewhat mix result while considering applicants who...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, whereas, while, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1144.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 211.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42180094787 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94571781251 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 176.041082164 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488151658768 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 345.6 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.6529866205 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.111111111 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4444444444 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341928235459 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.176554662369 0.084324248473 209% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0730374788546 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252695135673 0.151304729494 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366166262328 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 164, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s in each age range increased after it. Whereas, advertisment campaign had somewhat mix...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 208, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'mixed', 'mixt'.
Suggestion: mixed; mixt
...eas, advertisment campaign had somewhat mix result while considering applicants who...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, whereas, while, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1144.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 211.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42180094787 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94571781251 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 176.041082164 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488151658768 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 345.6 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.6529866205 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.111111111 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4444444444 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341928235459 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.176554662369 0.084324248473 209% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0730374788546 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252695135673 0.151304729494 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366166262328 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.