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It is often argued that even though changes made in the farming techniques some people still are having the issue of scarcity of food. The mani reason behind this notion is a lack of awareness and transportation and these issues can be overcome by arranging different awareness campaigning in the rural areas,
Indeed despite advancements in technology, the majority of local farmers are not having proper information about adopting the latest agriculture processes. This is because they are not having modern gadgets and instruments that can provide the information and make them aware of the new era of farming which forces them t make farming with the old practices only. For example, In India, still many village farmers who are not familiar with the latest hybrid compose fertilizer pattern still, they are using the oldest style of making natural compose that not gives them enough fruitful results. Due to that, individuals who live in critical areas, have to suffer a lot to find farming products.
This problem can be diminished by arranging proper awareness of advertisements and training classes. The administration has to take initiative to foster their people to use a new style of farming techniques so that can follow it and able to perform it to grow more and more items. Besides this, the government can also enhance some policies that help local people financially in applying a new way in their farming sources. For instance, after the development of the genetic process in the food, Indian farmers had successfully planted kiwis in India at affordable rates.
In conclusion, although the major changes made in the agriculture process, lacking knowledge creates an issue of shortage of food in some undeveloped areas and to control these problems the authorities have to take certain steps so that all farmers can able to apply it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Indeed,
...ness campaigning in the rural areas, Indeed despite advancements in technology, the...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, so, still, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.03092783505 330% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 26.3917525773 171% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1556.0 937.175257732 166% => OK
No of words: 304.0 206.0 148% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11842105263 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74347627106 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 127.690721649 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569078947368 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 497.7 290.88556701 171% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 16.3608247423 183% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.2363481912 44.8134815571 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.6 76.5299724578 203% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 30.4 16.8248392259 181% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.7 4.34317383033 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.216113520407 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0766984524023 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.12726935374 0% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0580467560999 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 8.37731958763 214% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 70.7449484536 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 7.45979381443 201% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.01 8.71597938144 149% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 7.59969072165 130% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 41.2886597938 220% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 8.62886597938 232% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.0 8.54432989691 164% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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