Some people believe that money is the most important factor for achieving happiness. However, others believe that happiness has nothing to do with money.
Do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion and examples.
Everyone wants to register for the treasure of happiness. Presently, some people believe that money opens the door of happiness. By contrast, others claim that the relations between happiness and money are poles apart. Here, I would like to accord with given statement.
There are manifold points to support my point of view. First and foremost, love, caring and sharing of family and quality near and dears set the foundation of happiness. On the other hand, some rich people are deprive of love and family support due to personal, social or commercial reasons. Hence, they are supposed to be less...
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The overall performance and ideas are great.
but you can't say your ideas are better than other ideas.
So double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
some rich people are deprive of love
some rich people are deprived of love
happiest are the people who know art of living, rest are passing the days only.
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wealthy people are more happier than destitute masses.
wealthy people are much happier than destitute masses.
wealthy people are happier than destitute masses.
art of living and enlightend mind define the true feeling of happiness.
the art of living and enlightened mind define the true feeling of happiness.
Sentence: For example, healthy people can enjoy every moment by eating, wearing and doing a wide range of activities according to their wishes where as some people are affluent but victim of many chronical ailments.
Error: chronical Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Where as poor or middle class people can not fulfill their dreams in the absense of money.
Error: absense Suggestion: absence
Sentence: However, art of living and enlightend mind define the true feeling of happiness.
Error: enlightend Suggestion: enlightened
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 3 2
No. of Sentences: 23 15
No. of Words: 360 350
No. of Characters: 1818 1500
No. of Different Words: 207 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.356 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.05 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.571 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 136 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 96 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 70 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 44 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.652 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.126 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.609 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.279 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.492 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.068 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5