Write a letter to the school to apply to be a volunteer In the letter Introduce yourself and give details of your children who attend the school Explain why you are interested in the position Talk about any relevant experience that you have with children

Essay topics:

Write a letter to the school to apply to be a volunteer. In the letter,
- Introduce yourself and give details of your children who attend the school.
- Explain why you are interested in the position.
- Talk about any relevant experience that you have with children.

Submitted by AKNIC on Mon, 12/28/2020 - 17:49

Dear Principle(Seju),

I am writing this letter to apply for the volunteer work that is going to start at your school in the next week. I am good to express thought to the children that's how they would understand what I will try to teach them.

I have completed my graduation with science as a major subject and I heard from my kids that your school is in need of someone who could able to contribute free teaching classes in the morning time. My kids have requested me to write a letter to you and apply for it as volunteer work.

Due to this covid pandemic, I have been sitting at my home for a long time, as my company laid me off due to low work. Educate children about science was one of my dreams since I graduated. My elder son told me that in your school there is one vacancy for a science teacher and I would like to enroll myself for that position.

Before I started my field job as an engineer I was practicing as a science teacher at Gajera girl's school, Surat. I worked there for over a year and have accomplished many achievements and also awarded one of the best teachers of the year.

I humbly request you to consider my past experience and willingness to work as free to do a contribution to society.

Yours Faithfully
XYZ

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 159, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...good to express thought to the children thats how they would understand what I will t...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...stand what I will try to teach them. I have completed my graduation with scien...
^
Line 11, column 37, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: experience
... I humbly request you to consider my past experience and willingness to work as free to do a...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 92, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and willingness to work as free to do a contribution to society. Yours Faithf...
^^
Line 13, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ribution to society. Yours Faithfully XYZ
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1032.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 234.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41025641026 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54998965104 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564102564103 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 313.2 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.8815725075 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8181818182 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2727272727 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.18181818182 4.34317383033 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200594484379 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0843347894642 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668007103766 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114289975383 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639633105997 0.0580467560999 110% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 70.7449484536 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 159, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...good to express thought to the children thats how they would understand what I will t...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...stand what I will try to teach them. I have completed my graduation with scien...
^
Line 11, column 37, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: experience
... I humbly request you to consider my past experience and willingness to work as free to do a...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 92, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and willingness to work as free to do a contribution to society. Yours Faithf...
^^
Line 13, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ribution to society. Yours Faithfully XYZ
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1032.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 234.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41025641026 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54998965104 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564102564103 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 313.2 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.8815725075 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8181818182 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2727272727 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.18181818182 4.34317383033 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200594484379 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0843347894642 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668007103766 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114289975383 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639633105997 0.0580467560999 110% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 70.7449484536 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.