The essay argues that as more and more people resort to online resources to get the latest news and books to read,it will cause folks to never purchase paper based newspapers or books in the near future. In my personal opinion, it is true somewhere yet not completely. Therefore, I am partially agree with this.
This is generally true that numerous people nowadays cite online platforms nowadays to catch up on the very latest news and even newly released books as well. This is due to the reason that, not only these social media platforms are cost free but convenient too. As a result of this, a lot of people falls for it as they don't have make a payment for the content. Hence, anyone would go for it instead of paying for printed newspapers or books.
However, this is not always the case in many scenarios. Firstly, not all content on these platforms is for free. In other words, there are many applications and blogs which requires you to acquire a premium membership in order to gain access to all the sources which are worth reading. Therefore, one may not be able to relish reading online. Consider KINDLE application for an instance where viewers are charged to have a smooth experience of reading. Secondly, as technology is progressing many newspapers or books are available in digital forms which means that the same content can be online as well as in print. However, this doesn't means that people will stop purchasing printed versions of it as not all the people are online and some don't like the experience too.
In conclusion, I believe that the trend of accessing information such as news or book stories cannot halt it being available in printed versions even if a lot more people read online.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 114, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...to get the latest news and books to read,it will cause folks to never purchase pape...
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Line 1, column 211, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...pers or books in the near future. In my personal opinion, it is true somewhere yet not completel...
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Line 1, column 296, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...t completely. Therefore, I am partially agree with this. This is generally true th...
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Line 3, column 322, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...s, a lot of people falls for it as they dont have make a payment for the content. He...
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Line 5, column 632, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...line as well as in print. However, this doesnt means that people will stop purchasing ...
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Line 5, column 743, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... not all the people are online and some dont like the experience too. In conclus...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, in other words, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72757475083 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48493435161 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554817275748 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.530456774 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8666666667 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215094281086 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656938281077 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471877536408 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124388607938 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0287114682206 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.