It is true that homeschooling is the thing of past which is considered to be of no use in modern society. While I agree that there are a couple of benefits of homeschooling, I favor there are more positive points for learning outside the comfort of home.
First of all, it is true that there are some pros of schooling at home. The very first reason is that children feel safe as we can hear child related crimes in schools. Hence, it becomes easy for parents to take care of their offsprings wisely. Secondly, which is todays biggest problem depression which is occurring in a preschooler's life can be overcome by parents by setting flexible timing for study. Therefore, it is safer and less depressing.
However, I strongly agree that homeschooling is of no use when it comes to todays competitive world. Firstly, not every parent is capable of teaching their children if they do not have a high degree. In such instances, it may become difficult for a child to match the standard of quality education in schools. Secondly, parents may not be able to remember all the material needed, which might make the learning process slow.
Moreover, being outside the house and going to schools creates a perfect surroundings for a student to be independent and gives them the chance to socialize with others. This in return, makes them stronger to tackle different problems in the coming future. Not only this, they will be highly confident. More specifically. A survey conducted by a Maxican university over the confidence level of school children and of those who are in a homeschool setting. They found that about 70%of the school going children gave answers to the questions asked about subjects in schools, gave right answer and were more confident than students going on their own.
In conclusion, despite a few pros of homeschooling, I think it's way more better to send children to school owing to the reasons mentioned above.
- Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters such as food clothes and entertainment is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes Other people believe that it is important 87
- Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters such as food clothes and entertainment is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes Other people believe that it is important 67
- In the future nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying What extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 56
- Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together Do you agree or disagree 56
- Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals Others say that there are more important environmental problems Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 265, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'todays the biggest'.
Suggestion: todays the biggest
...r offsprings wisely. Secondly, which is todays biggest problem depression which is occurring i...
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Line 3, column 323, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'preschoolers'' or 'preschooler's'?
Suggestion: preschoolers'; preschooler's
...blem depression which is occurring in a preschoolers life can be overcome by parents by sett...
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Line 7, column 74, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'surrounding'?
Suggestion: surrounding
... and going to schools creates a perfect surroundings for a student to be independent and giv...
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Line 9, column 69, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
... pros of homeschooling, I think its way more better to send children to school owing to the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, i think, in conclusion, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1609.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87575757576 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7298321324 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578787878788 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9719048098 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6470588235 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4117647059 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.17647058824 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.093546438861 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0277295027628 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0274330453606 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0509178884696 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300447568665 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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