The bar chart shows the scores of Team A,B and C Over four different seasons.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
As per the bad chat illustrate team A,B and C gain different point in four different year.
Overall it is clearly seen that team is score 5 point in the year of 2002. Where is Tim be obtained 82 points in the same year
If we talk about team are in the beginning of year 2002 it has scored five point. Then after one year in 2003 it dries up to 11 points. In the year 2004 25% of rice in the noted. More ever again it decreases up to 8 points.
team B is always gaining a great point in all the year. In 2002 it skyrocketed up to 82 point rather than all the other teams. after that it fallen down up to 60 point in the year 2003. In the year of 2004 again 30% of the ratio has decreased. But in the year 2005 it rises up to 55 point on rested there.
team C always fluctuated between 5 to 15 point. In 2002 team C gain 10 points whereas in 2004 it rises upto 15 point, and again it loss 3 point in 2004. At last team C is at the last position with 5 point in the year 2005.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 38, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , B
As per the bad chat illustrate team A,B and C gain different point in four diff...
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Line 2, column 75, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Where” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...m is score 5 point in the year of 2002. Where is Tim be obtained 82 points in the sam...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...btained 82 points in the same year If we talk about team are in the beginning...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Team
...ver again it decreases up to 8 points. team B is always gaining a great point in al...
^^^^
Line 6, column 127, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: After
... point rather than all the other teams. after that it fallen down up to 60 point in t...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 127, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “after” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... point rather than all the other teams. after that it fallen down up to 60 point in t...
^^^^^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Team
...ises up to 55 point on rested there. team C always fluctuated between 5 to 15 poi...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, then, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 780.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 3.80487804878 4.92477711251 77% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.96775916848 2.65546596893 74% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50243902439 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 206.1 283.868780488 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.0 1.45097560976 69% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.4542406555 43.030603864 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 55.7142857143 112.824112599 49% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.6428571429 22.9334400587 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.57142857143 5.23603664747 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0732823559219 0.215688989381 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0340007458375 0.103423049105 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446823339733 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0669203011079 0.15604864568 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484780620833 0.0819641961636 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 3.8 13.2329268293 29% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 108.03 61.2550243902 176% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 1.7 10.3012195122 17% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 4.17 11.4140731707 37% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.72 8.06136585366 71% => OK
difficult_words: 18.0 40.7170731707 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 11.0658536585 54% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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