In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and university studies.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people and
give your opinion.
There are nations where youngsters are asked to take a time off between completing secondary and tertiary education. I believe students should not take a leave from education for this long as it can breaks the rhythm of study. However, there are both merits and demerits associated with this idea which will be discussed in the forthcoming paragraphs.
The major benefit for students who intend to travel or work before stepping to the university study is that they get an exposure of certain professions. As a result, this can helps them to elevate their confidence by gaining experience and making money. Apart from this, pupils who wish to travel overseas are more likely to attain knowledge about different cultures, traditions and history of countries. For instance, students who want to pursue travel and tourism course can benefit themselves while exploring new spots.
However, there are some drawbacks related to this scenario. Firstly, there is a likelihood for children to get distracted from education due to addiction of earning money. Consequently, this can limit their academic knowledge and career growth. Secondly, teenagers who choose to travel may not return to their home country after certain period because of tempatation. For example, my friend went to Europe in 2016 and after that he lost his interest to take admission at university. Had he planned to continue the study, he would have become a chartered accountant now.
To conclude, having knowledge of professional sector and getting to know about the customs of other countries are the postive aspects. On the other hand, the negative aspects such as early enticement of wealth and can lost interest from academics are practically detrimental.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 200, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'break'
Suggestion: break
... from education for this long as it can breaks the rhythm of study. However, there are...
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Line 3, column 176, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'help'
Suggestion: help
...tain professions. As a result, this can helps them to elevate their confidence by gai...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, apart from, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25631768953 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74186240231 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638989169675 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.5537777159 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.0666666667 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4666666667 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121884633883 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.038273496322 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377233173323 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0664394107075 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341877722253 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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