In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large
sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between
cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public
transport.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In some countries some people consider it is necessary to spend large amount of money for constructing new railway networks for bullet trains between cities , while others say government should spend money to improve existing public transport. In my opinion the government should pay attention to the bullet train railway lines because of its safety, cheapness and environmentally friendly.
Firstly, construction of new railway networks can be beneficial as its time efficient to travel compared to existing public transport because, bullet trains are really fast, on the other hand current buses and trains take a lot of time to travel somewhere, however, constructing new railway lines can take a lot of time, so that, it may be good idea to improve existing transport system.
Secondly, bullet trains are cheaper and carbon free so that, it may be a great innovation for people and environment. Providing that bullet trains use electricity and cheaper than planes to travel. Although, improving existing public transportation may cost less money for the government.
All in all, it would be more beneficial for people if the government pay attention to improve new railway networks, because this one is more beneficial than others and it is not damage environment too.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 157, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...etworks for bullet trains between cities , while others say government should spen...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, while, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1072.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 203.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28078817734 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86427235651 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 176.041082164 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546798029557 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 100.487180622 49.4020404114 203% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 153.142857143 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.7142857143 7.06120827912 208% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.429433334074 0.244688304435 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.193815404664 0.084324248473 230% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.164448557276 0.0667982634062 246% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251377071927 0.151304729494 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134281668586 0.056905535591 236% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.94 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 157, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...etworks for bullet trains between cities , while others say government should spen...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, while, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1072.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 203.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28078817734 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86427235651 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 176.041082164 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546798029557 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 100.487180622 49.4020404114 203% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 153.142857143 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.7142857143 7.06120827912 208% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.429433334074 0.244688304435 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.193815404664 0.084324248473 230% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.164448557276 0.0667982634062 246% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251377071927 0.151304729494 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134281668586 0.056905535591 236% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.94 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.