Scientists believe that the world is in danger due to environmental changes. Some people say that personal lifestyle changes should be made to reduce the damage to environment, while others think that the government should do something to help. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Indeed, uncountable environment issues are arising day-by-day that are causing many issues all around. Therefore, some of the folks suggest people to bring changes in the existing lifestyle to deal with these issues whereas some of them say that the government should take prudent steps. This essay will not only discuss these two aspects but also shall deduce my own opinion on this phenomenon.
On the one hand, transiting in the people life cycle would have positive impact on the environment. For example, if they avoid riding own car, it will reduce emission and shall diminish air pollution. Similarly, everyone must adopt green shopping by avoiding the use of plastic bags and preferring decompose material such as; a paper bag, to carry items. These will reduce soil pollution which is one of the biggest threats to the environment.
On the other hand, the state governments should not rely on the individuals as many of them are not eco-friendly. Therefore, the state should legislate laws to prevent environment which can be done by the government only. Unlike government, an individual has no power to rule over others for this purpose, the government should impose fine on emission whether it is from factories or personal vehicles which are not possible for a person. Thus, the wise decisions can be made in the interest of environment by the government only.
In my opinion, although the government should impose strict rules for protecting environment, the individuals must think for its safety. Though the government can make rules and regulations for industries, consumers, and the public, but masses should not only restrict the use of private cars but also should become green consumers by using decomposed material and cycle to cover short distance. Thus, the environment can be secured from the adverse impact causing by individuals.
In conclusion, keep in view of above said perspectives, both the individuals and the government should consider the environmental issues and should combat them from all sides together. An individual and the government should not depend on each other for its preservation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 115, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...sing many issues all around. Therefore, some of the folks suggest people to bring changes i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, similarly, so, therefore, thus, whereas, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 7.85571142285 280% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1793.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22740524781 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8115237102 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548104956268 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9024802932 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0625 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4375 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8125 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280845933337 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0899480192257 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579769441142 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148445606536 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509763419728 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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