The common notion that workers are generally apathetic about management issues is false, or at least outdated: a recently published survey indicates that 79 percent of the nearly 1,200 workers who responded to survey questionnaires expressed a high level of interest in the topics of corporate restructuring and redesign of benefits programs
The argument that common notion that workers are apathetic about management issues is false or outdated raises some important concerns that must be addressed to substantiate the argument. The statement that follows, reasons out that workers show high level of interest in topics of corporate restructuring and redesigning of benefit programs. Further, the author gives some survey data facts as an evidence to support the claims. This alone does not constitute a logical argument and it certainly does not provide support or proof to the main argument.
Most inadequately, the argument does not add...
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Score: 5.5 out of 6
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 369 350
No. of Characters: 1892 1500
No. of Different Words: 173 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.383 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.127 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.619 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 147 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 118 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 74 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 41 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.421 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.364 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.263 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.365 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.559 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.1 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5