An increasing number of people are now using dating sites to meet their better halves
Although, there is an extremely high rate of individuals seeking a soul mate dating website. In my opinion in term of socializing, this phenomenon brings both disadvantages and advantages
On the one hand, dating sites could pose a serious threat to their members, by creating a flawless counter fleet profile, evil predators can easily swindle others, who are innocent and lack caution on the internet, for money or other propose. This will cause an increase in social crime. moreover, online dating can impair face to face interaction. Compared to those who meet their part her through traditional routes such as friend gatherings in the bar of at workplace, dating online users seem to find it more convenient and intriguing to enjoy a virtual meeting rather than meet in person thereby reading a discouraging in real communication
On the other hand, the dating website is a psychological crutch for singles who have a sense of shyness and fearfulness as opposed to approaching someone in person can talk by sending a message or icons, therefore, reducing the to cement a new relationship. Furthermore, through dating sites, people can achieve more opportunities to find a comparable March. It is because thanks to the various members all over the world, users can meet quality people regardless of geographic distances which is one of the burdensome barriers in traditional dating methods.
In conclusion, despite people varying about their opinion, there may be some drawback is, the benefits of dating website I'm connecting singles is obvious and can not deny.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, may, moreover, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1323.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20866141732 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91910749072 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.641732283465 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 163.848205285 49.4020404114 332% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 165.375 106.682146367 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.75 20.7667163134 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.375 7.06120827912 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225841752548 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0949394122191 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0222596441809 0.0667982634062 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120560966838 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046037817024 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.0946893788 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.53 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.09 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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