Doctors, nurses and teachers make a great contribution to society and should be payed more than entertainment and sports celebrities.
Do you agree or disagree?
Deciding wages is one of the hot debate for the last century, some argue that health and education specialists shall enjoy more financial benefits than those serving in media or athletics industry. I agree to the uplifting salaries of our medical and teaching sector while not comparing to the payment packages of renowned artists and athletes.
Firstly, it is fairly clear why this proposal has been put forward. Medical and Teaching professionals both are very reputable and honored professions. Indubitably, life saving and grooming one’s personality are the most challenging jobs in the world. Every developed country has strong medical and educational system equipped with highly trained staff. Take the example of Teachers, they pave ways for their students to secure good careers in future by teaching them necessary skills. Similarly, Doctors and Nurses saved lives of people by providing care, medications, performing diagnostics and complex surgeries. Both of them are essential for civilized nations and their roles cannot be neglected.
However, while unfolding the other side of the coin, some commentators believe that artists and athletes are blessed with exceptional talents. They struggle very hard to compete at national and international level in order reach a stage where they make history and make us proud. Their achievements will be associated with whole nation and they will be remembered over the course of centuries. Celebrities serve as flag bearer representing their nation just like ambassadors. For an instance, consider Shaoib Akhter, world faster bowler of the world has brought a name to Pakistan for his extra-ordinary potential. Moreover, no one can deny Nusrat Fateh Ali Khan’s services for promoting Pakistan Qawali music to the world.
To recapitulate, the aforementioned arguments are strong on both sides however all of them our hero in one way or the other making us better or proud. However, teachers and medical staff pays shall be raised to acknowledge their efforts and hard work.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, moreover, similarly, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1723.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41823899371 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81866451799 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.541810556 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.352941176 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7058823529 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.47058823529 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.098843512589 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0275567214769 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0308805953109 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0607623404503 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0193296835245 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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