Do you agree or disagree?
It is better to relax by watching a movie or reading a book than doing exercise.
In current society, there are various ways for people to relax. While some people try to read a book or watch a movie for relaxation, others dedicate their time to implementing exercise. It is so controvertible for people to determine a specific action for better leisure. In my view, people would be able to relax by activity instead of spending their time reading a book or watching a movie. They can forget tedious work by exercise, find out new hobbies they can focus on, and improve the quality of sleep.
To begin with, doing exercise makes people not to be conscious of their works at home. People have difficulty coping with a bunch of assignments and transcriptions they have to complete. When they cannot finish them until the due date, their feeling would be depressing. At this point, people can forget about their hard work and homework by exercises because they are capable of concentrating on them while playing any sports. Therefore, they can change the mind making them disgusting to a fresh one.
Secondly, people can relax from broadened their hobbies by doing exercise. People sometimes attempt to consume the same interest in their free time. For example, my father has been playing and watching golf for his whole life. However, he does not obtain any other hobby at all. The type of people to be into one interest would decrease the possibility to make them relived. Thus, activities not only create hobbies but also provide them with moderation.
Finally, what people continuously do exercise for moderating brushes up the quality of sleep. After people read a book or watch a movie, they do not feel tired because there is no tremendous movement through the action. On the other hand, people who do exercises can sleep well because the monotonous works produce them to be exhausted. Thus, they can feel moderate to go to bed.
To sum up, people should do exercises for meditation instead of reading a book or watching a movie. I surely believe that they would not concern about their work at home by the action, limit their favor to try to do sports, and affect a bad habit for their sleep.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, in my view, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1762.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 366.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81420765027 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5170030055 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53825136612 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.7840713988 48.9658058833 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0909090909 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6363636364 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.95454545455 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19246100814 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682598170433 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0787801230079 0.0737576698707 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131085608855 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611035090101 0.0645574589148 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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