In current society, there are various ways to relax. While some people try to read a book or watch a movie for relaxation, others dedicate their time to implementing exercise. It is so controvertible for people to determine a specific action for better leisure. In my view, people would be able to relax by activity instead of spending their time reading a book or watching a movie. They can forget tedious work of company and school by exercise, find out new hobbies they can focus on, and improve the quality of sleep.
To begin with, doing movements makes people not to be conscious of their works at home. People have difficulty coping with a bunch of assignments and transcriptions which they have to complete in their school and company. When they cannot finish them until the due date, their feeling would be depressed. At this point, people can forget about their hard work and homework by physical efforts because they are capable of concentrating on them while playing sports going gyms. Therefore, they can change the mind making them disgusting to a fresh one.
Secondly, people can relax from broadened their curiosities by doing exercise. People sometimes attempt to consume the same scrutiny in their free time. For example, my father has been playing and watching golf for his whole life. However, he does not obtain any other enjoyment at all. The type of people to be into one interest would decrease the possibility to make them relived. Thus, activities not only create entertainments but also provide them with moderation.
Finally, what people continuously do physical activities for moderating brushes up the quality of sleep. After people read a book or watch a movie, they do not feel tired because there is no tremendous movement through the action. On the other hand, people can sleep in depth because the monotonous works produce them to be exhausted. Thus, they can feel moderate to go to bed.
To sum up, people should do exercises for meditation instead of reading a book or watching a movie. I surely believe that they would not concern about their work at home by the action, limit their favor to try to play sports, and affect a bad habit for their sleep.
- Which one do you think is important to long lasting friendship 1 Help you when you need 2 Share same interest and hobby 3 mutual trust 60
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Children rely too much on the technology like computers smart phones video games for fun and entertainment Playing simpler toys or playing outside with friends would be better for children s developmen 52
- Doing which activity do you think can better help you strengthen the friendship between you and your friend having a good time together with your friend solving your friend s problem with him or her 67
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement These days children spend more time on doing homework or participating in organized activities related to school or sports However they should be given more time to do whatever they want 73
- If you want to get a promotion at work which of the following measure would you take 1 do more extra additional jobs 2 participate more actively or state more personal opinions in group discussions 70
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in my view, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1827.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 375.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.872 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56285119003 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554666666667 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.1038935564 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0454545455 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0454545455 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.68181818182 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153853552109 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555938696435 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0786470436698 0.0737576698707 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104167573259 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494514004519 0.0645574589148 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.