Nowadays, the majority of economically and financially powerful countries engulf the youngsters from developing countries. Although this has a significant benefit on both the young citizens and the particular country in which they live, there are also a number of consequential drawbacks.
On the one hand, well-developed countries give opportunities to young adults to obtain a proper university education, to find a profitable job and to have a better and healthier lifestyle. Thus, many people choose to live or emigrate there due to the greater living conditions. A positive aspect of that situation could be the overflow of enthusiastic, passionate and eager people who want to set up new organizations and campaigns, to improve living standards in poor countries and to fight the world’s environmental problems such as famine, global warning, racial segregation and many more. In addition, the more young people a country has, the more its population, dominance and influence are increasing.
On the other hand, the elderly preserve the moral, cultural and ethical values and the traditions of a nation. They are considered to be more erudite, conscientious and reasonable. For instance, the USA presidents, ministers and governors are mainly older adults at prime old age. Hence, if a country has considerably more youngsters rather than older people, the continuity between generations may be broken and therefore many customs and principles could fade into oblivion.
To conclude, both young and old people are essential for maintaining the balance in a society. However, the young workforce can contribute more to a country. Hence, undoubtedly the pros of the situation outweigh the cons.
- At the present time the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults compared with the number of older people Do you think that the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages 78
- An increasing number of schools provide tablets and laptop computers for students to use in school replacing books and other printed materials like exams and assignments What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend 90
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46212121212 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14592854197 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609848484848 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.4909185014 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.923076923 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163506030669 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522304455258 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376330186954 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0948895544398 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0207525281425 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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