Some people think the spread of multinational companies and globalisation produce positive outcomes for evryone Do you agree or disagree with this statement

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...are showing good impression on everyone.In my perspective,these kind of companies...
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...impression on everyone.In my perspective,these kind of companies are beneficial both ...
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Line 1, column 140, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
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...mpression on everyone.In my perspective,these kind of companies are beneficial both peopl...
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...everyone.In my perspective,these kind of companies are beneficial both people and...
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...are beneficial both people and companies,according to this,these kind of companies need fo...
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...h people and companies,according to this,these kind of companies need for people. To ...
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... people and companies,according to this,these kind of companies need for people. To comme...
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...anies need for people. To commence with,it is clear-cut that multinational compani...
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...d profitable for ordinary people because,companies pay taxes for government.In addition,th...
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...ause,companies pay taxes for government.In addition,they employe local people and ...
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...ies pay taxes for government.In addition,they employe local people and it may be solu...
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...here is one negative side the profit of this companies go to the country of origin ...
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...gative side the profit of this companies go to the country of origin . However,m...
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...s companies go to the country of origin . However,most global companies in IT sp...
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... go to the country of origin . However,most global companies in IT sphere,and their...
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...wever,most global companies in IT sphere,and their websites are free to acces, good ...
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Suggestion: , Facebook
...are free to acces, good example for this,Facebook,Instagram,Telegram,Google,people can us...
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Suggestion: , Telegram
...good example for this,Facebook,Instagram,Telegram,Google,people can use them for free and...
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... this,Facebook,Instagram,Telegram,Google,people can use them for free and socialize the...
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...can use them for free and socialize them,because they are specialized people’s daily lif...
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...zed people’s daily life occasions namely,people can chat or send some kind of document,...
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...e can chat or send some kind of document,video,picture with each other. To conclude,m...
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...eo,picture with each other. To conclude,multinational companies and globalization demonstrate...
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...e effect on people because of their free,ease,and popularity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, in addition, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 953.0 1615.20841683 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 148.0 315.596192385 47% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.43918918919 5.12529762239 126% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 4.20363070211 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 5.26281491655 2.80592935109 188% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 176.041082164 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648648648649 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 506.74238477 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.60771543086 124% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.4398142413 49.4020404114 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 190.6 106.682146367 179% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300680768496 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166190542265 0.084324248473 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528061132623 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166190542265 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528061132623 0.056905535591 93% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.7 13.0946893788 181% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 8.2 50.2224549098 16% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 11.3001002004 171% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 20.66 12.4159519038 166% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.52 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 24.0 10.7795591182 223% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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