The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph and table graph are providing information about the merely monthly temperature and the approximately rate of hours of sun over a period of twelve months in London, New York and Sydney.
Overall, the temperature in Sydney was higher at the beginning and end of the peripd. However London and New York showed a significant rise in the middle of the period.
In January, the temperatures in London and New York were nearly 10 and 5 degrees. The tempereture in New York experienced an upword trend, with 30 degrees higher than London about 5 degrees in Julya and was the highest one. At the middle of July, the temperature in New York began decreasing and showed the lowest point, above 5 degrees, at the end of the period. Furthermore London rose significantly to 25 degrees. Finally, London experienced a downward trend, came down to the same number as in January.
In January, Sydney experienced a number of above 25 degrees. From here, it gradually declined to 15 in July. At the end, it showed an increase to exactly 25 in December, with 20 more than New York.
The total sunshine was respectively higher in New York, with a number of 2535. On the
second place came Sydney, with 2473 hours. London considered to be with more than less hours of sun, with 1180 hours.
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- The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
- The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 56
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 87, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...at the beginning and end of the peripd. However London and New York showed a significan...
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Line 3, column 364, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...ve 5 degrees, at the end of the period. Furthermore London rose significantly to 25 degrees...
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Line 6, column 83, Rule ID: LESS_DOLLARSMINUTESHOURS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer hours'?
Suggestion: fewer hours
... London considered to be with more than less hours of sun, with 1180 hours.
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Line 6, column 83, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun hours is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
... London considered to be with more than less hours of sun, with 1180 hours.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, however, if, second
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1062.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 226.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69911504425 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6749242368 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491150442478 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 329.4 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 3.36585365854 386% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.7511737655 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.8571428571 112.824112599 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1428571429 22.9334400587 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.92857142857 5.23603664747 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0960406348006 0.215688989381 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0366953329354 0.103423049105 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441593717897 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0646394269604 0.15604864568 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536540029606 0.0819641961636 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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