The second reason why I advocate this trend is that the single child will receive adequate care and home schooling
It seems to be a fact that nowadays many married couples have a predisposition to have fewer children in many parts of the world. There is a perception that falling birth rates will definitely have a profound impact on the economy and impede the economic development of a nation. I completely disagree with this contention, and here are my reasons.
People should first recognize that giving birth to only one child will lower the toil of bringing them up. Undoubtedly, nowadays due to the escalation of almost all types of expenses, it is compulsory for parents to spare most of their income for their kids’ tuition fees and the family’s cost of living. As a result, to maintain a high standard of living is highly challenging. For example, in the old days, when many Vietnamese households had more than two children, parents generally had to work more diligently. In their retirement years, instead of being financially independent, most of them normally were contingent on their children’s allowance and even became their burden. Not surprisingly, many couples are conscious of such a potential hardship and choose a more advisable solution that is having fewer or no children at all.
The second reason why I advocate this trend is that the single child will receive adequate care and home schooling. In today’s society, most parents are preoccupied with their work commitments, and so the amount of time dedicated to educating their offspring at home is generally insufficient. In this event, having too many children means the effectiveness of rearing them will probably diminish. Because of time constraints, it is difficult for parents to manage to complete both work duties and childcare well simultaneously. In other words, giving birth to merely one child will ensure that the kid is brought up more specifically.
In conclusion, while many people are apprehensive about the negative effects of the declining birth rates, I firmly believe that this trend only generates more benefits for both parents and their children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1717.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17168674699 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91800631436 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572289156627 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2810128969 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.466666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1333333333 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.06666666667 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195127032911 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0851894140218 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.211534436607 0.0667982634062 317% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123310117707 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.142745128339 0.056905535591 251% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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