Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position
Differences between men and women are a discursion as old as the human being. Since humans stepped into the world for the first time there exist male and female beings and some obvious differences between them, not only physical but also psychological and mental ones. Because of those differences, as in many other animals’ cases, tasks were not equally spread. However, since then, the human race has evolved; the world has changed; therefore, If everything is nowadays different, why some of us still believing in gender differences?
In my point of view, the role of women in today’s society is not the same as it used to be many years ago. Society is evolving and we are learning to appreciate women not only for her beauties or her skills as mothers or housewives but also as professional workers and researches as good as men or sometimes even better. In most of the task, I think that it is nonsense to still talking about gender differences. There exist governors who are women, such as Anglea Merkel one of the most influential person in the world, or researches or business women as hard as her work mates. Moreover there exists "househusband", clothes designers or nurses who are men while those are traditional female tasks. In my opinion, in today’s world one could be whatever he or she wants, independently of his or her gender.
However, there still existing differences between man and women. In general, men are bigger, stronger, and faster while women are more sentimental, smart or organized. But those are only clichés, not rules. Men are more likely to be big or huge but there will always exist exceptions and those exceptions will exist in every field. Not every man in the world is suited to be a fire worker and, of course, not every woman is not suited.
Summarizing, I believe that today’s world has change and men are women are and should be equal to be whatever the feel like to do. There exist differences, in general, between them but them, but also exist many exceptions and therefore no one could decide in advance is a women or a men, just for been male or female, is suited to do something.
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Sentence: Differences between men and women are a discursion as old as the human being.
Error: discursion Suggestion: discussion
Sentence: Moreover there exists 'househusband', clothes designers or nurses who are men while those are traditional female tasks.
Error: househusband Suggestion: house husband
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