Some people believe that the only purpose of films is entertainment. Others say films have educational value. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant
There is no doubt, films play a crucial role in educating industries. some believe that movies are only for entertainment while others think it has educational values as well. I would agree with those who argue cinema industries helping students in their education.
Firstly, movies are becoming the most favourite hobby of peoples and they are preferring to going to the cinema to watch a movie at least once a week. Its tendency ranging from action to horror, from science to carbon to meet various demands from all ages. Additionally, we get a chance to fresh our minds when watching moves as compared to other media and we can spend quality time with our family.
On the other hand, the advantage of movies are also varied, some directors and prudcuers produce movies according to their knowledge. For Instance, movies on science can broaden the audience's mind with the learning from the area which is out of the planet like Mars, animal world, etc. Cartoon movies not only for fun but also giving knowledge to children about animals, planets, humanity, and kindness. Moreover, movies are not only meant for entertainment it allows us to learn from the characters played in films. they are like books from which we can learn how to interpret the transferred values from directors' intension.
In conclusion, although some are considering movies are a source of entertainment but in my view movies are an easy way of learning along with entertainment. Finally, I would request the government to encourage filmmakers to bring products with more educational values.
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- Some people believe that the only purpose of films is entertainment Others say films have educational value Discuss both views and give your opinion Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant 73
- Some people believe that the only purpose of films is entertainment Others say films have educational value Discuss both views and give your opinion Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant 73
- Some people believe that the only purpose of films is entertainment Others say films have educational value Discuss both views and give your opinion Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, moreover, so, well, while, at least, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1321.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08076923077 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71106378824 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619230769231 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.2209174012 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.615384615 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8461538462 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144075126788 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592534179929 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685862181614 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0960040131827 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664269081967 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.