In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food.It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Nowadays fast food plays an essential role in people’s life. Whether the government should make the tax of them higher or not is a hot issue. I believe a higher tax are able to efficiently control the purchase of fast food and make the public healthier.
On the one hand, people can hardly control themselves when face seduction, hence the government’s help is necessary. Nowadays, due to the convenience and tastiness of fast food, they have been increasingly eaten by people. In fact, the reason why these food are convenient is that they have been prepared in advance and have lost the freshness. Furthermore, in order to maintain the excellent taste of the food, there are always numerous harmful additives in them, which could leads to a wide range of diseases. Therefore, it is necessary for the government to do their part to control the purchase of fast food by imposing a higher tax.
On the other hand, with more and more citizens suffering health problems caused by the unhealthy diet, the labor market will be influenced negatively. It seems that once people increasingly go to hospital to treat their diseases because of eating too much fast food, those who make efforts to work would be less and less, which will cause detrimental consequences to the quality of labor market. Apparently, the responsibility rests with the government to take steps to rise the tax to make the citizens healthier, so the quality of national labor market could be guaranteed to some degree.
To summarize, if the government could impose a higher tax, the public will reduce the eating of fast food and will benefit a lot not only the people’s health condition, but also the labor market of a country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 248, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this food' or 'these foods'?
Suggestion: this food; these foods
...aten by people. In fact, the reason why these food are convenient is that they have been p...
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Line 3, column 478, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
... harmful additives in them, which could leads to a wide range of diseases. Therefore,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, furthermore, hence, if, so, therefore, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89655172414 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74044876855 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551724137931 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8210060368 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.333333333 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326561760229 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121730811535 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735665963593 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19747867886 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0226105084303 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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