With the technological advancements in the field of medicine, humans were able to conquer many of the deadly diseases in the past. While some advocate that government should mandate vaccination for all children against common diseases, others contend that parents should take the decision of immunizing their children or not. Although, I completely agree that the decision should be left with the individuals, I will still discuss both the views in this essay.
Many educated people support mandating the immunization due to several reasons. One of the most crucial reasons is they believe that if every child is inoculated against common diseases like small pox or flu, the human race would be able to abolish the diseases completely in the future. Polio, for instance, was a deadly virus which affected many people detrimentally and was abolished almost across every country when the government immunized all the citizens mandatorily. Another reason that they state is that not everyone understands the science behind vaccinations and most of them refrain from inoculating without knowing its benefits. If the government does not oblige vaccinations for coronavirus, none of the people would be interested in immunizing themselves against the virus, fearing the side effects of the vaccinations.
On the other hand, people, including myself, feel that parents should take the decision of vaccinating their kids. Not every child has same level of immunity and it is purely dependent on the type of food and the environment in which they grow up. In India, for example, most people follow traditional foods which have all medicines required to fight against common flu virus. People also opt for safest medical treatments like Ayurveda, in which the common diseases are treated with herbs and oils, rather than inoculating a dead or minimum level of virus into the body. In addition to this, parents know more about their child’s medical conditions and hence, they can deny any vaccinations which might have adverse effects on their kids.
In conclusion, although I agree that immunizing children against common debilitating diseases is of paramount importance, the decision of immunization should be given to the individuals rather than mandating it by the government.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, still, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1922.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35376044568 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79581938193 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548746518106 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.6702142425 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.285714286 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6428571429 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196584317194 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693303998001 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583440711576 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130229693678 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275311988279 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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