The two given diagrams reveal the changes in the layout of the coastal village of Seaville, which was situated on the sea, in 1980 and 2010.
It is noticeable that an empty space in the west side of the river was filled with retirement village, boat club, hotel and restaurant. The area, where the marsh and the holiday cottages were located, was replaced with permanent houses within the given period of time.
In 1980, in the middle of the Seaville village there was nothing (besides the tea room and sand dunes in the right back corner) which later in 2010 was modernized with retirement village and boat club in the middle, the hotel and the restaurant instead of tea room and sand dunes. The woodland at the top left corner of the first map had been demolished and a golf course was built on the same place.
In 1980, the marsh with holiday cottages was demolished for constructing the permanent houses after 30 years. Additionally, the river at the east side of both maps was crossed by a bridge.
Despite the all alters above, the East bank on the east and the hotel on the west side of the given diagrams remained stable.
- The diagrams below show the coastal village of seaville in 1980 and 2010 61
- The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities 61
- The two pie charts below show the online shoping sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013
- The pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 67
- The two pie charts below show the online shoping sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...situated on the sea, in 1980 and 2010. It is noticeable that an empty space in ...
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... with permanent houses within the given period of time. In 1980, in the middle of the Sea...
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...ouses within the given period of time. In 1980, in the middle of the Seaville v...
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... of both maps was crossed by a bridge. Despite the all alters above, the East b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 931.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 203.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58620689655 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28129349965 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522167487685 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4549366603 43.030603864 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.375 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.375 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.75 5.23603664747 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16684491033 0.215688989381 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709173790332 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102787677066 0.0843802449381 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104015273491 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109037591242 0.0819641961636 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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