undoubtedly, many youngsters are involving in crime, because they think that with this they look cool in front of their friends. but they do not know the further results of crime. there are many reasons behind the increasing crime rate. firstly, unemployment is one of the major reasons, because in India many youngsters are jobless. we all know that to fulfill our needs money is necessary. when teenagers can not earn any money from any job, they will start taking drugs. so, they start stealing money from others to buy drugs. secondly, the second main reason is peer pressure. nowadays many teenagers want to make friends who are criminals because they think with this they can become famous. pressure from friends leads to major crimes such as killing someone and steal money from the bank. for example, a couple of years ago, one guy killed his own parents. just because his parents were not giving money to him to buy drugs, so his friends told him to kill his parents. he took that criminal step after this, police took them including his friends to the jail
to reserve this trend, the government can do many things, they should provide more job opportunities to the teenagers, by this will become busy in their jobs and they will not attract to criminal activities. illicit content should be banned because it also leads to crime. we all know that many criminal activities are uploaded on the internet. the government should give punishments to criminals according to their crime. fot raptor murder criminal must be promptly punished. so that society can learn a lesson from this.
to conclude, I would like to say that crime rates are increasing among teenagers which can affect their life and their parent's life too. the reasons are unemployment, peer pressure and so on. to reduce the crime rate government should provide job opportunities and by banning some internet sites. the government must give punishment according to the crime
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92121212121 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43241803231 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.571243211 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.8181818182 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.59090909091 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 18.0 3.9879759519 451% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208546944862 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671413183859 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614138694438 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157765627864 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292470806057 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.66 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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