In many countries there is the controversy point about people should eat animal or not. It has both side negative and positive both. There are numerous nutrients in meat which improve health. While there are some benefits of eating meat, I partially agree that people should not to eat meat for healthy life, this level of nutrients also get from the vegetables.
To commence with, in many countries there huge number of people are vegetarian and they avoid to eat animal for there regular meal. It is common belief that people should not to kill animals for the food purpose because similar type of nutrients and proteins we get from vegetables. A good illustrations of this 28mg protein consume by mean and also same kind of we get from paneer. Also, gym trainer advice people to eat that for mass gain and muscles. It is good for digest and healthy for body. Furthermore, in some countries there are many animal breed endangered to extinct level. So, it is good to work on conservation project instead of kill them and eat them. For instance, in India there is breed renowned as white tiger are extinct and there is minimum number of tigers are live nowadays. Government should spread awareness for the same that not to kill them for meal and save them to enhance to create attraction for visitors.
On the other hand, people who prefer non-vegetarian as meal they kill the animals as a food. As a result, they gain weight and perfect body nutrients and protein. For example, there are many body builder 10-15 eggs at time. Additionally, they prefer to eat meat as there meal every time which help them improve there body strength. Moreover, in Arab countries there is a rule that everyone should eat meat at dinner time. They think that it is good for healthy life which is myth. This is shown by in Arab nation there were 55000 beers in 2010 which dropped up-to 10000 in 2017 which shows that they prefer beer's meat as there meal.
In conclusion, although there are many benefits of eating meat, I strongly agree that people should not eat to meat as there meal for healthy life it is just myth. It is suggested that, people should take advice from the doctor or Gym trainer who gives proper diet for healthy life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 89, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'avoid eating'.
Suggestion: avoid eating
...umber of people are vegetarian and they avoid to eat animal for there regular meal. It is co...
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Line 3, column 291, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'illustration'?
Suggestion: illustration
...proteins we get from vegetables. A good illustrations of this 28mg protein consume by mean an...
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Line 3, column 552, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'breeds'?
Suggestion: breeds
...in some countries there are many animal breed endangered to extinct level. So, it is ...
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Line 5, column 86, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'food'.
Suggestion: food
...tarian as meal they kill the animals as a food. As a result, they gain weight and perf...
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Line 7, column 284, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...who gives proper diet for healthy life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1835.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 394.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65736040609 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28777085569 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.446700507614 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.0823650648 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.4090909091 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9090909091 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.68181818182 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195764752911 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065889095492 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600881188067 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150789510918 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478065137055 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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