The bar graph provides complete information about the population of four countries named india, china, USA and japan from the year 1950 to 2000 with the prediction of 2050.
Overall, it is clear lt seen from the graph that at the beginning of the period china was leading in population, but it is predicted that in future India will be highest in the population.
To begin with, in 1950, china accounted for more than 25% in the total world population, but it in the year 2000 it decreased by 3%, and it is predicted that chinas population will decreased in 2050. Secondly, inda contributed 15% in the total world population, the number increased in the year 2000 to about 18%, but it is predected that number will rose up to 22% in 2050.
Furthermore,in 1950, usas population was 10% of the total word's population, which was deceased to 7% in the year 2000 and it is expected that there will be no change in this figure till 2050. Additionally, Japan's population was 5% of the total world population in 1950, which droped to 4% in 20th century, and it is predected that it will go down to 2.5% at the end of 2050.
- The chart below show the percentage of whole world population in four countries from 1950 to 2000 will projection till 2050 67
- computers do not help children learn more effectively On the contrary the use of computer has a negative effect on children s physical and mental development Do you agree or disagree 78
- The diagram below shows how coffee is produced and prepared for sale in supermarkets and shops 11
- The given graph shows the nitrogen oxide emissions produced by four vehicles 86
- As we are facing many problems which affect the whole planet good relationships between different countries are becoming more important than ever before To what extent do you agree or disagree 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 159, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'chinas'' or 'china's'?
Suggestion: chinas'; china's
...creased by 3%, and it is predicted that chinas population will decreased in 2050. Seco...
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Line 5, column 182, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'decrease'
Suggestion: decrease
...s predicted that chinas population will decreased in 2050. Secondly, inda contributed 15%...
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Line 5, column 352, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'rise'
Suggestion: rise
...%, but it is predected that number will rose up to 22% in 2050. Furthermore,in 19...
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Line 7, column 12, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , in
...l rose up to 22% in 2050. Furthermore,in 1950, usas population was 10% of the to...
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Line 7, column 118, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hich was deceased to 7% in the year 2000 and it is expected that there will be no...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, second, secondly, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 16.0 5.60731707317 285% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 921.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 203.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53694581281 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63609863087 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48275862069 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 260.1 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.482926829268 1035% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 9.58731801218 43.030603864 22% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 153.5 112.824112599 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.8333333333 22.9334400587 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 5.23603664747 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294746666544 0.215688989381 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161860460398 0.103423049105 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585138914713 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181346051722 0.15604864568 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0739000710787 0.0819641961636 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.36 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.0658536585 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.