Nowdays,it is good for us, we can earn good earn money who earns good money that is good for yourself and own country.A lots of countries person gets currency in every year.I would like to tell you about two views in this essay that one side person earn good money and second the earn money control by government
Firstly,In others coutries person is earing good salary day by day because they job work as a white collar job.They earn good money. Furhermore, they are money hing proffiency in these day because it is good for a own contries, any others people earn good money.for instance, There are a plethora contries over the word american indiviusal work as a high post scientist, adovocate etc. They recieve good money because that is preety good for county as, it boosts country economy.
Secondly, Others people think salaries must be forbid because they want to that all people get same salaries because, this is good for country all pubilc moreover,They want to get good salaries for example, it is not good because people want to earn good money and that take everthing
In conclude,
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: aatif imtiaz
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...at is good for yourself and own country.A lots of countries person gets currency ...
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...ries person gets currency in every year.I would like to tell you about two views ...
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... side person earn good money and second the earn money control by government Firstly,...
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...ond the earn money control by government Firstly,In others coutries person is ea...
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...n money control by government Firstly,In others coutries person is earing good ...
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...oney control by government Firstly,In others coutries person is earing good sa...
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...use they job work as a white collar job.They earn good money. Furhermore, they are m...
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Line 2, column 182, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
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...more, they are money hing proffiency in these day because it is good for a own contries,...
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... hing proffiency in these day because it is good for a own contries, any others p...
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...cy in these day because it is good for a own contries, any others people earn go...
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...se that is preety good for county as, it boosts country economy. Secondly, Other...
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... is good for country all pubilc moreover,They want to get good salaries for example,...
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... moreover,They want to get good salaries for example, it is not good because peop...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 41.998997996 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 907.0 1615.20841683 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 190.0 315.596192385 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77368421053 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3219356239 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 176.041082164 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557894736842 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 506.74238477 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 47.0 20.2975951904 232% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 126.580754856 49.4020404114 256% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 226.75 106.682146367 213% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 47.5 20.7667163134 229% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.25 7.06120827912 258% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315316804369 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.202811354187 0.084324248473 241% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768297915351 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241319396098 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559146239226 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.8 13.0946893788 189% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.23 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.4 11.3001002004 181% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.27 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 78.4519038076 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 25.5 9.78957915832 260% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.8 10.1190380762 206% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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